Historical,
fantasy, horror, science fiction, historical fantasy, action-adventure, crime,
detective, mystery, romance, urban fantasy, legal thriller, paranormal,
military; there are many different genres of fiction to write, each with its
own subcategories and crossovers. And with all those different genres it is
incredible to believe that there are generally only two types of writers. There
are discovery writers and outliners. The two types can bleed into each other
and any writer can try both, but an author will fall more into one category or
the other. They each have their strong points and weaknesses and neither is inherently
better than the other; the difference is that you, the writer, will find
yourself more comfortable and ultimately more successful at one or the other.
Discovery
writing means that you discover the story as you write it. You start with an
idea. It may be a character, a setting, a conflict, or just a scene that pops
into your head and you write it down. That becomes the starting point of your
manuscript. Then you work around it, flesh out more characters and keep going,
discovering more about your characters as they come to life on the page in
front of you. It’s very exciting and fresh as it comes out of your head and
onto the page in front of you.
For
some discovery writers, the more often you tell the story the less enthusiasm you
have for it, so outlining the story from the beginning takes some of the joy
from the process. Outlining is, after all, just telling the story in bullet
points. You learn the parts of the story as you go along, sometimes hanging on
to your characters by your fingertips. If they run away with the story, you can
follow them to see where they go because it might be more interesting than
where you were going to take them. Things happen you didn’t expect. You’ve
discovered the conflict already so you have in mind a solution that you’re
working towards, but getting your characters from the beginning to the end is a
journey you get to take with them. It’s very exciting every time you sit to
write.
It
can also be a frustrating, seemingly never ending process. It’s similar to
driving across the country from Washington D.C. to Hollywood without a map or
GPS. You know where you want to go and have a general idea how to get there,
i.e. go west, but it’s incredibly easy to get lost along the way. The stories
are exciting, but once you finish your rough draft your editing can take twice
as long because you have a lot more manuscript than you have story, or not
enough. If you discover a big twist at the end you have to go back through and
make sure it’s supported and foreshadowed. You’ll have to cut scenes, great
scenes, because they don’t fit your story (but don’t delete them, cut and paste
them into a “Reuse” document. Great writing should never disappear). And the
hardest pitfall of all in discovery writing is writing thousands of words in a
story that never goes anywhere or ends too abruptly.
Outlining
is aptly named, because it is writing out an outline for your story before you
begin to write it. You still begin in the same place, with a character or idea
or setting that you write down. But instead of starting your story there, you
begin to outline. What is the conflict? Who is the main character? What does
the main character want? Who/what is standing in his way? These questions are
all answered in the outline. And outlines don’t need to be long- decide what
needs to happen in each chapter and write 3-5 bullet points. Chapter One: Main
Character, brief description, does this or has this happen. MC meets this
person and makes this decision. Side Character one is in this peril. Chapter
Two: Main Character meets love interest looking for Side Character and they
have this interaction. They don’t like each other. Introduce antagonist and
central conflict in this setting.
It feels dry writing like this, but there are
several benefits. When you start writing your manuscript, you’ll write faster.
It helps you stay focused on the story and know where you’re going. Any time
you spent outlining instead of writing is more than made up for in the time you
save editing, because you were able to put all the important plot points in
place. You’ll have your research done, because you’ll know beforehand what
research needed to be done. Character name choices are easier because you know
them and what they want before you start writing, which is key to getting
excellent and realistic dialogue and thought from each character. Outliners
have less writer’s block. And outlining doesn’t have to take a long time or be
an arduous process. It’s your outline; you can do as much or as little as you
want. And the best thing about outlining is that you get all these benefits but
if you find something better as you write, you’re allowed to change it.
The
drawbacks to outlining aren’t as many as the pitfalls discovery writing has,
but they are perhaps more insidious. For some writers, writing out a full and
descriptive outline pulls the joy out of their story. They already wrote it,
why would they want to write it again? So the outline, no matter how brilliant,
sits in a file that hasn’t been opened in months because in the writer’s heart,
that story has been done. If writing a complete outline answers your need to
tell the story, then it isn’t for you.
The
second drawback has been called “World-builder’s disease” on the WritingExcuses podcast. Essentially it’s a writer who loves to outline and who wants
to fill in all the details because they don’t feel ready to start writing yet.
That’s all fine and good until your desire to detail out the setting and
characters overwhelm your desire to actually write the story, and you disappear
into a rabbit hole of increasing complexity in the name of making the world of
your story authentic. A noble goal, but not one to sacrifice your story to
attain.
I
do something that’s more of a combination of the two. I outline, and I made a
full, detailed outline that’s several pages long. Once I have the outline
finished, I ignore it and write the story. The outline for me is a place to
work out the bumps and kinks of the story so I have it in my head who the
characters are and what they want. Then as I’m writing I follow the story.
Sometimes the order of the scenes is changed; that’s no big deal. Then other
times I introduce new characters and plot twists that I wasn’t expecting at
all, but since I still know what needs to happen I know how to make them fit
and work towards my conclusion.
I
think most writers fit somewhere more happily close to the middle. Write an
outline, make a plan, and get a map. Then as you drive through the story, feel
free to stop in new and interesting places and enjoy yourself on the way. You
can always refer to the map if needed to make sure you get where you’re going,
but the exact route can vary as you grow and change with your characters.
Because the most important thing about writing is to love it while you’re doing
it. Not every day, not every scene, but overall to love that this is what we
get to do. In every genre, love your story. And be thorough in your editing.
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